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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-06-06 08:18 PM



The day broke into my night.
I was still sleeping,
when you kiss me so sweetly.
Waking my senses,
stiring in me the need for you.
While I pretended to sleep,
your opportunistic touch explored as you enjoyed,
and conquered every corner of me.
Until I could not resist,
giving in to love.




© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Tovi
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1 posted 2001-06-06 08:20 PM


Lovely, leaving this reader in fond memories.  Thank you for that.
Sven
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2 posted 2001-06-07 09:26 PM


I'll give in to this any time. . .

you always manage to capture these little moments so well walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-06-07 09:44 PM


well written Walker!!! enjoyed  
azblond
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4 posted 2001-06-08 12:59 PM


I give...I give!!  

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-06-08 01:28 AM


(sigh) The sweet passionate romeo strikes again with another romantic sigh! (sigh) It is so very amazing how just one touch can drive two lovers together in heavenly embrace and how there is no resistance, it's all magic love. (sigh) Your heart always floods with true love, and your loving words always inspire me! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-06-09 12:49 PM


Hope you didn't resist too long Walker  

Love it.

Titia

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Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-06-09 02:48 PM


Beautifully written.
rosepetals25
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8 posted 2001-06-09 06:42 PM


walker,

     Just wonderful! I liked this alot

TaraB

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