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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-06-08 01:48 PM


Open wide your skies
and God's eye will shine bright through
showering the soul

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-10-2001).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-08 01:50 PM


~*~
rainbows in my eyes
in the great light of this love
shine on in your song
~*~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-08 01:50 PM


Amen.
SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-06-08 01:51 PM


sun shining bright
light of love from above
rain down on me

ethome
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4 posted 2001-06-08 02:36 PM


Thanks for sharing ...very spiritual!
Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-06-08 05:29 PM


Deca--
Thank you for your poetic response.  I'm glad you liked this

Interloper--Thank you for the amen.

SEA
showering the heart
rays of open sky imparts
rain of paradise

Ethome--Thanks for your comments, and stopping by to read.

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-08-2001).]

VAS
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Oregon
6 posted 2001-06-10 12:34 PM


lovely, lovely PM!
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
7 posted 2001-06-10 04:20 AM


Beautiful inspirital senryu....love it my friend.

Charisma

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-06-10 09:08 AM


Glory to Him!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2001-06-10 07:19 PM


Very nice..peaceful.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2001-06-10 07:21 PM


love your words tonight..huggssss

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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