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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-06-06 02:35 PM

~*~

simple is, as does
quell the swell that you have wrought
simply put, kiss me

~*~

I asked not of you
to carry me through on crest
of these, passion's waves

~*~

but I lay, now beached
upon sandy shores, 'neath sun
completely, undone

~*~

Captain of the Seas
come, and give your soul to me
your tides drew me in

~*~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2001-06-06 02:43 PM

And your poem drew me in. Lovely writing, always.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-06 02:47 PM

BRAVO

superbly gentle with a slight touch of the melancholy

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-06-06 02:53 PM

Beautiful....just beautiful this touch of love found in Ocean's waves.

Charisma

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2001-06-06 02:55 PM

lovely poem.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-06 02:58 PM

~*~
I have heard your plea
and my essence can be yours
you must go asea
~*~
my tides carry you
from sandy beach to my side
where you shall remain

together we sail
upon wave and through the trough
to our new kingdom
~&~
you shall rule with me
though you alone rule my heart
surrendered with love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-06-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-06-06 03:08 PM

........I'm left breathless.........

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-06 03:33 PM

together we find
this ocean can't cool our heat
waves only fan flames

~SEA~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-06-06 03:34 PM

"Captain of the Seas
come, and give your soul to me
your tides drew me in"

*************
And what if I did
.....come to you
with a love you never knew
would u let my waves
carry you
to where
life begins anew
******************

Thank you..........
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2001-06-06 03:50 PM

Absolutely stunning work!

Love in sea so blue
Sculpting hearts of summer fling
Sifting passion's sand

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-06-2001).]

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

10 posted 2001-06-06 04:35 PM

Beautiful, well done...

PM

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

11 posted 2001-06-06 05:22 PM

One word: BEAUTIFUL!

~Tier

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