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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-06 02:34 PM


Union
Virginia Salter

with tandem hearts
we watched
the blue fade
as crimson and fuschia
filtered into view
building
filling up the firmament
before our very eyes
welling up our sighs

forming up our silhouette
as if to be, in ebony, one Valentine surprise
© June 6, 2001

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-06 03:02 PM


Very cool progression to the image, VAS.  Took me a minute to see it but then it came together and it was like a Valentine surprise!  
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