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azblond
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 2001-06-06 02:14 PM





Did we ever kiss?
In the merging moments we shared
We came together
Two souls, two hearts
Sharing moments in time.
We touched each other in the intimate ways that lovers do,
Yet we never called it love.
We caressed to quench the need
The burning of two bodies
Hungry for the warmth from one another
Our tongues danced in passion.
But did we ever kiss?
The soft tender sharing
The moist sweet breath
That whispered words the mind cannot form
I feel now in this moment
This one meeting of two
When we are not joining out of physical need
When we cling to each other in the moonlight
Holding tightly afraid to let go
Needing more than skin against skin
Breathing quickly, feverishly
And my lips rise to meet yours
Sweet breath, moist and tender
Caressing my lips as yours dance
A song as gentle as the starlight
This moment we have finally shared
A kiss.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 2001 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-06-06 02:19 PM


WOW!  Well done.  Sensual and descriptive.
azblond
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2 posted 2001-06-06 02:27 PM


Thank you...This is one of my favorite pieces if I may admit such!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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with you
3 posted 2001-06-06 02:31 PM


and now it is one of my favorite's to be kept in my library  
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-06-06 02:31 PM


a very original way to describe a kiss....well done!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


azblond
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The Steamy Desert
5 posted 2001-06-06 02:38 PM


Sea, I am so flattered!
Irish rose, I'm glad you liked it.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2001-06-06 02:42 PM


Welcome back!! It's nice to read you again!!!    
azblond
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The Steamy Desert
7 posted 2001-06-06 02:46 PM


Poet!!  I've missed you all so much!  I promise to not loose touch again, to not write leaves me gasping for breath, to not share and read postings of others kills my passion!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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