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Waseem Cheema
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0 posted 2001-06-06 12:31 PM


KHUSHBOO
Smell


kiun maray mun ko ittna satatay ho tum
Why you are teasing my heart so much
kiun maray tun ko ittna turpatay ho tum
Why you are putting my body in agitation so much

Muhabat ki khushboo bassa kar dil maen maray
After settling the fragrance of love in my heart
kiun maray gi ko ittna jalatay ho tum
Why you are burning my heart so much

Zinda ho kar bi zinda naheen haen mugur
I am not alive while being alive
Kiun sookhay phoolonn maen khushboo basatay ho tum
Why you are settling fragrance in the dry flowers

Piyar ki rah maen uun battuk janay k baad
After wandering like this in the way of love
Kiun wafa ki munzil mujay dikhatay ho tum
Why you are showing me the destination of love

Abbi to tamamm ummer parri hay muhabat k wastay
Still there is resting a long life for love
Kiun piyar k samunder maen  mujay bahatay ho tum
Why you are flowing me into the sea of love

Maray dil ki bussti ujar janay k baad Waseem
While after destrying the town (settlement) of my heart Waseem
Kiun Ujray gulistan maen phool sajatay ho tum
Why you are decorating the flowers in the destroyed garden
    
                        
~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-06 12:36 PM


oh, wow, beautiful...but I never expected the painful ending...but then do we ever expect it

BRAVO

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-06-06 12:43 PM


I like the way you "co-write" with your native language.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-06-06 12:51 PM


Very good finale!  I have trouble writing in one language.  Well done.  
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4 posted 2001-06-06 01:47 PM


Wasi~ this is beautiful.....I love how you do your poetry in both languages... ~SEA
Romy
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5 posted 2001-06-06 06:13 PM


It was nice to be able to read this in both languages! The first has such a beautiful sound when read aloud and the second ended in a sad surprise...
I enjoyed this!
Debbie

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6 posted 2001-06-16 01:40 AM


it is beautiful waseem .....you will never find the answers to your questions..it is part of the game called love ,, and even    women do not know why they do it ....just  suffer
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