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You & I
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You & I |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Hush, lover let the night speak a million wishes & promise us only one for a million hearts search for the same answer as you & I true love that transcends time & space Let's hold us here, in the soft chill of darkness for eternity cannot stop what has already begun, The miracle of you & I... ~Tier 6/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and a miracle it is....lovely Kathleen Blake |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
beautiful !! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual..the queen of the romantic... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Irish Rose, Zzz, and Captain Hair, I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think the poet speaks correctly, as this is a delightful read.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely writing... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Hello Sunshine! I'm glad that you liked the poem! Thank you, Poeminister, kind of you to say... *smiles* ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ahhh, the romance for which we know R.T.   Great job, Tiersdin!!!the only departure from the expected, did you want "was" or "has" I know you didn't want both do you know how to go into edit, I didn't find out until several months after being here |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
VAS, Thanks for the heads up! I will edit that bit out. *smiles* ~Tier |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
let the night speak a million wishes & promise us only one ~~~~~~~~~ I wish I had said that! Wonderfully woven and presented. BRAVO! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is so enchanting! Thank you for a lovely read. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tier, this is something that I wish for all of us. . . wonderful!!! -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ohhh, like Interloper, i liked the first stanza a lot... very emotive thoughts here... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
We should all be so lucky. Lovely write!  All writing comes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful....just beautiful....enjoyed this loving piecevery much Charisma |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
You touch and hold emotion beautifully. I loved this! Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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