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SEA
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0 posted 2001-06-06 10:45 AM



how do you want me
tell me what it is you need
let me give to you

~*~

how do you want me
what can I do to please you
let me warm your heart

~*~

how do you want me
I need to make you happy
let me see you smile



~SEA~


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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-06-06 10:47 AM


warming hearts, making smiles...you do it so VERY well....
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-06-06 10:49 AM


Sea,
I'd like to read the answer to this one. Enjoyed. Sy

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3 posted 2001-06-06 10:54 AM


Now what man can resist such a tender plea as this?  *smiles*

lovely poem, SEA!

~Tier

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4 posted 2001-06-06 10:54 AM


such a moving, honest poem, SEA, this is really lovely.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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5 posted 2001-06-06 11:08 AM


a lovely set of questions to ask..and who could resist such tender honesty? Very nice..
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6 posted 2001-06-06 11:18 AM


**SMILING**

See how good you are  

Waseem Cheema
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7 posted 2001-06-06 12:21 PM


How do u want me
.........................??? plz tell me....LOLO  

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8 posted 2001-06-06 12:34 PM


my, my, my the gift of open willingness, lovely for the perceiver/receiver  
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9 posted 2001-06-06 12:38 PM



I can only smile and choose not to reply due to my modest demeanor.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-06-06 12:39 PM


These are the loveliest senryus I've seen in quite a while.

Question: How do you want him?

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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11 posted 2001-06-06 12:41 PM


How do I want you? SEA, my girl,
You really are the most!
I want you on white, wheat or rye
Or I'll take you on toast!

I'll take you with some ketchup, dear
Or even mayonnaise.
Hey, grey poupon would not be bad
Or even honey glaze.

I want you when this hunger strikes
At morning, noon or night.
I want to hold you in my hands
And take a little bite.

Perhaps I'll dunk you in my milk
Or cover you with syrup.
I know, beyond a doubt, one lick
Would really make me cheer up!  

I want you spread in front of me...
You're so delectable!
I'll take my fork and dig right in
Until I have my fill!

I'll put you on a cookie sheet
and then fire up the oven
then cover you with chocolate chips
And sprinkle you with lovin'.

How do I want you? Just to show
How serious I am
I don't say this to many...but
I want you more than SPAM!!  

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12 posted 2001-06-06 01:12 PM


Lady~ thank you, I like to make smiles  

Sy~check above...Balladeer said it perfectly   thanks  

Tier~ hopefully not mine   thank you  

Kathleen~ thank you!  

Cpat Hair~ thank you very much  

Janet~   like to see you smile  

Wasi ~ hugs  

VAS~ thanks, I hope he likes it  

Interloper~smiles are good  

Titia~ how do I want him? All the time.....in all ways.....  
Balladeer~

then take me baby
cover me in your honey glaze
I promise you.....
I will amaze  

I will feed your hunger
no matter day or night
I'll make your Superman weak
with my Kryptonite

wrap me up in something saucy
or take me plain
either way ~ one taste
will drive you insane

Baby you can have me
with a side of Spam
however you want me
baby, here I am!!!


~SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 06-06-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-06-06 02:04 PM


ok, you talked me into it
I think I'm gonna try it.
From this day on I'm going to be
On a SEAfood diet!

My taste buds are on red alert
I just can't wait to munch..
I'm headed to California
And having YOU for lunch!  


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14 posted 2001-06-06 02:16 PM


Balladeer~~

Every meal
will make you satisfied
it will be the best diet
that you've ever tried!

Come to California......
I'll give you so much more than food
cause baby I'm always....
~always in the mood  


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15 posted 2001-06-06 03:01 PM


oh my........was smiling when I readed your senryes Sea.....but geesh.....Balladeer knows how to create some warmth inhere.

((hugs))
Charisma (searching for a fan now)

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16 posted 2001-06-07 10:45 PM


this was so wonderful i could barely read it.... lol

thanks!!! i loved every minute of it

rofl

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17 posted 2001-06-07 11:20 PM


Love this SEA, and the answer was easy...jwesley

how do you want me

- I want thee as thee are -

tell me what it is you need

- and take from thee only what you give

let me give to you

- fervent love, a lifetime of…

-

~*~

how do you want me


- in anyway thee come -

-


what can I do to please you


- stand by me, share all I am --

let me warm your heart

- just touch my hand, just touch my hand…

~*~

how do you want me

- I want you as I need you, 'till life itself doth end.

I need to make you happy

- then share my world, my dreams, my love, and see the things I see.

let me see you smile

a single thought of you, just a whisper on the wind,
and dreams of things that we could be,
all make me smile, my friend…

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 06-07-2001).]

SEA
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18 posted 2001-06-08 09:25 AM


Charisma~ thank you and yeah, that Balladeer is one hot cookie!  

Doreen~ glad you enjoyed my friend  

JWesley~ now here I am with the biggest smile, thank you so much for this amazing romantic reply.....*sigh* warming my heart...I will smile all day now.....thank you  

~SEA

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19 posted 2001-06-08 04:17 PM


Wish I could find a woman as willing as you...James
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20 posted 2001-06-08 04:26 PM


A kind open warm and inviting work! Love the honest willingness of love written!
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21 posted 2001-06-08 04:31 PM


James~ I'm sure there's one out there for you sweetie  

Ethome~ thank you for that  

~SEA

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22 posted 2001-06-08 08:00 PM


SEA~
This is delightful !
And the responses equally so !

Oh, Deer ! Can't believe he missed 'Over-Easy' or 'Sunny-Side Up' !
You must have 'Scrambled' him !


You go gal ! I Just love it !
~*Marge*~

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23 posted 2001-06-08 08:06 PM


another very enjoyable one  
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24 posted 2002-03-23 07:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know with a gorgeous loving heart like yours you are bound to please him forever and fill you with loves happiness! (kiss on cheek) May your love forever hold you happily, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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