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zzz
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0 posted 2001-06-06 10:40 AM


your partner and your trusted friend
on which you always could depend
his time on earth drew to an end
you feel afraid,alone

yet you still have your memories
your mind has many galleries
for you to choose when 'er you please
a place for you to roam

a place where he will always be
waiting for you happily
in each and every memory
to keep you save and warm

© Copyright 2001 marina mills - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-06 10:43 AM


Gently, bittersweet thoughts...
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-06-06 10:46 AM


ZZZ,
Enjoyed this very much.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-06-06 10:49 AM


This is a wonderful sharing of empathy...Welcome to Passions! Thank you for sharing, and please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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4 posted 2001-06-06 07:47 PM


well done. . .  

full of understanding. . . welcome!!  I think that you'll like it here. . .

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Tovi
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5 posted 2001-06-06 08:53 PM


I love the way you've rhymed in this.  Wonderfully done.  
vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-07-06 03:16 AM



zzz-
   what a tender and loving write..
   so very beautiful.
   welcome to passions..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Waseem Cheema
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7 posted 2001-07-06 05:58 AM


Very beautiful ........A complete truth
jwesley
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8 posted 2001-07-06 08:24 AM


Beautiful sharing of the heart here my friend...

jwesley

BloomingRose
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9 posted 2001-07-06 08:43 AM


Nice heartfelt poem.
Welcome to Passions!

Deb  

catalinamoon
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10 posted 2001-07-06 11:21 AM


Touching poem. Welcome to Passions, look forward to more from you.
Sandra

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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2001-07-06 11:54 AM


Welocme to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work.
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12 posted 2001-07-06 01:17 PM


I simply had to check out someone who shares the same name as mine.  

Welcome to Passions!!!

Marina

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Marina Crossley



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13 posted 2001-07-06 01:23 PM


very very soothing...i especially like the 'galleries' line
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