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. . . Goddess of tender passions
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. . . Goddess of tender passions |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
oh Aphrodite goddess of tender passions tutor me on love as you did Ares my love for her knows no bounds lust devours my mind  let lust be transformed channeled into tender touch of her silken skin school me tenderly to give exquisite pleasure time and time again Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very well done... good use of language and nice form.. I enjoyed!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A most lovely write... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
class begins with touch slow, soft, touch....to warm the blood hands on instruction ~*~ learn the ways of love listen to my whisperings let me teach you how...... ~*~ patience is the key lust shall melt into slow love one kiss at a time  ~SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Cpat Hair ~ Thank you. Lady ~ A most lovely comment. SEA ~ You MUST post this reply and share it with all. It is absolutely fantastic! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Wish you the best of luck, Enjoyed the read. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
No my dear.....that was just for you |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Soft, Sensual, romantic... three things I love.. *smiles* excellent! ~Tier |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Seymour ~ Thank you my friend SEA ~ I shall always cherish this. It has been put in my private library along with precious few others. Tiersdin ~ Me, too *grin* Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a stunning portrait of love! This is soooo good......  Kathleen Blake |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Bravo! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely, lovely...and temper it all with, yes, yes, yes, the caring for her needs above all. Magnifique!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Colleen ~ *blush* High praise indeed. Thank you. PM ~ Deep thanks VAS ~ [the Tall Texan scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust, his eyes cast downward to hide the redness of his cheeks] Aw shux, ma'am, 'tweren't nothin' ... but I'm sure pleased you like it |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
~*~ student, at my knee tender lessons to be taught listen, learn, with love ~*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ were I at your knee surely my mind would wander seeing milky thigh Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That was lovely but know what I think...I think you and Sea just have to do one together - a long one too, but what do I know? That was awesome (both of you)! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper....that would be fun....... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whoooohoooo....oh my how I love these senryus....and I agree with Mysteria, you and Sea must do that together. oh my....you both would be a great team. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mysteria ~ An interesting proposition. Did you know you did that SEA ~ I'm up for it if you are [no pun intended] Just how do I get my foot out of my mouth? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Charisma ~ Sorry, I almost missed you. You DO realize that it might have to be written on some type of fire retardant media. Might only be fit for the Adult Forum |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very carefully  LOLyeah....I think it would be really fun....I'll email you....... |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
...Beautiful...I think one of the greatest achievements is how you inspire others. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Ok, I think azblond ~ What a kind and wonderful thing to say. Thank you for reading my work and the compliment. |
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