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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-06-06 09:34 AM



I came into your world
like a child not knowing how
things are done
I came into your world
your phazer was set on stun

Shot through the heart
I reeled in pain
Shot through the heart
Will I ever be the same

Not knowing this world around me
I loved the way I thought was good
Loved you as best I knew, like a true
love should

Your world really made me think
the same yet oddly apart
I knew you needed another way
So shoot my loving heart

I Can change my loving ways
I can't change the way I feel
I Can't change history baby
and the pain from this raw ordeal

So melt my soul with kindness
relight our eternal flame
realise my darling the sunshine after
we taste the pain.


© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-06-06 10:22 AM


wow...hope she hears.....
Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-06-06 10:36 AM


Straight to the heart...

deeply touching

enjoyed!

~Tier

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