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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Cupid, Where did the arrow go? Did it veer to the left or was it blown to the right, or did you fire it deep into the night. Arrowless I wonder will the arrow ever hit me? Or do I contemplate that the target was the tree! Rich [This message has been edited by Hollowman (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Keep waiting, it will hit eventually... nicely done. PM |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
VERY good and thought provoking, too. However, Cupid never misses. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"Arrowless I wonder will the arrow ever hit me? " I've wondered that so many times myself...... A nice thought provoking lines........ Thank you for the read ******************************* It's only me.......only me |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
And just as I had given up I turned and what did I see Cupids arrow never missed He waited til first I loved ME! Great poem... Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This begs for more lines!!! Kathleen Blake |
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