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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-06-06 04:22 AM


i must be an alien here

i could never fall in Love
with words on a screen.
the picture's only two dimensional
and you only see what "they" want you to.

i could only fall in Love
with a woman i'd seen in person.
one who stimulated my senses,
as well as my mind.

all the words i put here,
are meant for the woman i saw in person.
she wrote her name on my heart with her smile.

so, if you're not her,
don't read it.
it's not for you.

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-06 10:08 PM


i guess i deserve a spanking for reading this uninvited...LOL  

seriously, i thought this was simply written but well expressed....i heard you..

[This message has been edited by faterider (edited 06-06-2001).]

PoemCrazy
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2 posted 2001-06-06 10:18 PM


Hi faterider!

no spanking, thanks for reading...tom


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