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latin passion
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0 posted 2001-06-06 02:06 AM



Thoughts and desires
soul and heart;
has always been here
even when torn apart.

Seeking no shelter
asking no champions.
Thought to be among friends,
some closer.

Still believe that,
which as a matter of fact.
For love and belief
is to stand beside them.

So, circle of friends,
some dear'r than others,
guard and protect
the essense of friendship.

Learned in taking care of
friendships, can sometimes
be a full time job.
But it's well worth it.

**Poets note**
Friendship is like a garden,
needing nature's special care.
I look for positives,
though I may grumble a little.
But that's ok, cause are we human?


© Copyright 2001 LP - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-06-06 02:13 AM


Indeed it is.  Beautifully said.

Poeminister

Logan
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2 posted 2001-06-06 02:35 AM


a nice walk among spreading branches of friends..enjoyed the read..smiles
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3 posted 2001-06-06 04:02 AM


Very nice sentiments indeed, and yes, we are all human!  Enjoyed!

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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4 posted 2001-06-06 07:43 AM


LatinPassions~
And in the spreading branches of friendship ...
we each will find our nesting place.

Such a thoughtful piece ...
Thank you for sharing !

You build a treehouse of friendship nicely !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-06-06 07:50 AM


love the warmth of friendship that you describe so well in this wonderful piece.

Charisma

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-06-06 07:57 AM


LP - very nicely written, and yes, friendships are to be cherished.

BC

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