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Sundown Junior Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 16does it really matter? |
Have you ever lost you heart while dancing? Standing in the villiage square his eyes like the ice forming on your hands, fatal movements the music still playing in your head, he becomes your poison in your blood (he's still dancing) your tears falling to the ground in love lost among Siberian December (he was on fire then the party was over) Have you ever lost your heart while dancing? "She's been looking like a queen in a sailor's dream, and she don't always say what she really means" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
This beauty was way back the wals. and deserved more replies. ------- Have you ever lost your heart while dancing? ------- oh yes I did. Charisma |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
The emotion you've portrayed in this is wonderful. Love is indeed a powerful thing.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...yes! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful....and yes..I have.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just lost my heart while reading! Glad this was brought to the top! a contrast of emotion with some stark visuals... |
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Sundown Junior Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 16does it really matter? |
thank you!! and to think it was about a hockey player "She's been looking like a queen in a sailor's dream, and she don't always say what she really means" |
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