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Vital Abundance |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
beneath the natural whisper of your touch, my disposition intensifies... rendered graceful is your countenance, not to be surpassed by the influence of this evening’s splendor... far beyond the reach of any clouds’ impact, our passion branches out to a higher sphere... learning the custom quickly is your wit, not to be outdone by the lyric of the night... in disbelief of the magnificence of forever, my fulfillment spins to enchantment‘s cadence... never again to want fruitlessly is my mind, resigned to being hypnotized by the influence of this evening’s splendor... long since forgotten by obscurity, our passion exposes its capabilities... relinquishing resistance to romance is my spirit, ceaselessly mesmerized by the lyric of the night... -kh 06/05/01 I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is amazing! Kathleen Blake |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"my fulfillment spins to enchantment‘s cadence..." A Wonderful and exalted read... Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
learning the custom quickly is your wit, not to be outdone by the lyric of the night... in disbelief of the magnificence of forever, my fulfillment spins to enchantment‘s cadence... ============================== ahh my queen of big words and bigger images and even bigger inspiration you make it all look easy...but then for you I know the words are... very cool write SP intense declaration of devotion must be nice to be this inspired .. send my muse a note and remind her.  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
ahh, snowpants, the spirit, soul, forever, the heart, what more could be so blissfully shown,,very nice...gentle smile |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kathleen: thanks! glad you enjoyed...  Poeminister: thanks for the compliments...glad you liked i! JM: yep...indeed, it is great when that sporadic inspiration decides to pop up... ...but, thank you so much, girlie, for your cool reply...glad you liked this one...  Logan: why, thank you for that kind reply...I am happy you enjoyed... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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