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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-05 09:34 PM


The sun soon will melt over the horizon
Replaced by a diamond encrusted sky
How much your love propels me
And takes me to places way up high

A pair of star-crossed lovers
Here we sit upon the sand
We've been here for many hours
Admiring this wondrous land

Your arm reaches around my shoulder
As we snuggle up so tight
How passionately you now kiss me
In the fading amber light

How I'll resign myself to you
As I enjoy your warm caress
Now I'm offering you my heart
As the place for your new address

You tell me that you love me
That you'll stay here by my side
How very special you make me feel
As you take me on love's ride

On a journey way up in the heavens
Is where you'll take me
Where we'll ride together on moonbeams
A place where our spirits will be set free

We'll catch a shooting star
On the way back down to earth
How we'll marvel at love's beauty
And this feeling of rebirth

Suetang

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1 posted 2001-06-05 09:37 PM


this is really beautiful   nice warm fuzzies    SEA
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-06-05 11:09 PM


what a place!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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3 posted 2001-06-06 02:35 AM


Very soft and romantic.  Enjoyed this read.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-06 02:49 AM


Like this...James
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