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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-06-05 09:26 PM



For all the poets at some other site
Who think they got it done all right
They’re on forum two but we got plus twelve
And pretty soon we’ll have a book we can shelve

They’re poetry is all pretty darn good
But we got a family and it’s understood!
They get feedback well at least just a few
We get so much cuz we can count on you

They got slamming and cussing galore
We all could diss it but instead abhor
We build up poets we got five fold
From Melanie age four to however old

We inspire each other to be better poets
If someone is down baby we know it
We get on the horn and birthdays are praised
If someone is down a kind word is raised

For all the poets at some other site
Come give us a try morning or night
Been here two years and will be for long
Send us a poem, story or song

We aint braggin we just be telling
Our grammar is great and so be our spelling
So if you hate the site that you’re on
Come send a mail to our not-sucky Ron

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-06-05 09:30 PM


Walt~ you are good...you know that?!   Very good   I like this very much!    ~SEA
Watersign6
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2 posted 2001-06-05 09:31 PM


Walt,you just dont know how much i adore this one because you see i tried another poetry forum before this one but decided i like this one alot better and havent been back to the other one since,just had too much
not so niceness going on there,you definately know what your talking bout in this poem   and   well done!

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
3 posted 2001-06-05 09:33 PM


You tell'm wayoutwalt, you just tell'm.

  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-06-05 09:49 PM


Walt!!! NOT SUCKY RON? LOL Oh, my!!


This is cute sir..and very true..PiP is the BEST!  

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-06-05 09:53 PM


LOL ... you always make me smile Walt, loved this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2001-06-05 10:20 PM


Wooohooo you go Bro!
Very well said m'friend  

Love it

Maree  

Temptress
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7 posted 2001-06-05 11:21 PM


WALT!   You're are the cutest, yanno?   I LOVE this place too!   I talk about this place to every person I can!   Cute poetry, Walt!  

VAS
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Oregon
8 posted 2001-06-05 11:49 PM


so Walt, what site are you talking about that remembers birthdays and knows when someone's down?
Balladeer
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9 posted 2001-06-06 12:10 PM


no forked tongue here, Walt...you tell it like it is  
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
10 posted 2001-06-06 01:33 AM


Thankies I see it and tell it. VAS did we miss you. I know I likes ya o yuh much as I know yuh and all.
kaile
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singapore
11 posted 2001-06-06 07:24 AM


LOL...and Long live Passions
MrTrial
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12 posted 2001-06-06 07:29 AM


The poem shows an understanding of normality and clever understanding of everyday words mixed with a message - like "diss"

Keep posting!

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
13 posted 2001-06-06 08:07 AM


yesssssss love this piptalk from you....

((hugs))
Charisma

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14 posted 2001-06-06 07:55 PM


no doubt walt!!!

we're the best. . . there is no substitute!!

great job!!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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15 posted 2001-06-06 07:57 PM


Bravo

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


azblond
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The Steamy Desert
16 posted 2001-06-06 08:14 PM


Woo Hoo Bud!!  I never left for another site, but now I know why I always show back up here-it's like coming home!! I missed you guys-Corporate America, I'm back with PiP!!!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
17 posted 2001-06-06 08:21 PM


How can I be ROTF and writing a response as well...

WRITE ON! RIGHT ON!

serenity blaze
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18 posted 2001-06-06 08:30 PM


made me smile!  
forevernbluejeans
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19 posted 2001-06-07 01:07 AM


GRINS....you always make me smile...and you are so very right...
Romy
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Plantation, Florida
20 posted 2001-06-07 10:25 AM


A great message to those who are just dropping in!  My feelings exactly but couldn't have said it any better!
Debbie

Effigy
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disbelief
21 posted 2001-06-07 01:23 PM


Great. real cute. :P
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