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JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-06-05 09:23 PM


The fiery countenance regards me
as ravens disperse in flapping clouds
but I am surrounded by anothers light
and even now her wings enfold and comfort me

There was a time when his interest
set my soul on edge with whispers
and the logic and reason that I held dear
were the locks and doors holding me back

I no longer fear what lies in the dark
and with her guidance I have found love,
a purpose, and a path to follow
with an Angels hand leading the way


© Copyright 2001 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2001-06-05 09:38 PM


Wonderful write.  Enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 2001-06-05 09:39 PM


Wow........this is wonderful!   ~SEA
snowpants
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3 posted 2001-06-05 10:14 PM


Very good write, James...I enjoyed this a lot...

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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