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Mountains ( revised )
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Mountains ( revised ) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Mountains I've seen the mountains and a sunset like I have never known before And how true to know that awesome breeze Ive forever waited for I have found the many fields where the flowers never die Where each new breath I took they learned to dance before my eyes... I've been on clouds that lie so perfect in the blue sky up above I've touched peace there with both these hands and held the purest love Ive reached the endless places on a swing made just for me And God I've tasted freedom just as far as I could see... I have walked along a beach where each wave would speak your name And never has the voice of grace ever sound the same I've been led to live the night where I have never known to be And stood beneath three golden moons hanging just for me... Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that path each time; that's where my angel sleeps And never have you seen the light far more brighter then the sun How it cradles every single move so silently and calm... I'm never lost, I'm always held, I can find my way back home It i's the hand upon my shoulder that I can never be alone I've been handed once again the sweetest promise of them all That I'll be held before the fire and safely after the fall... So there' is no right way or no wrong way to cry When such harmony and patience are always by your side And never will you have to search for life without the words For nighttime calls you blessed when inside that heart of hers... Sauni Sauni :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Saunni!! this spoke to me tonight. . . for too many reasons. . . thank you. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautifully expressed....so up above. Charisma |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Aw, Saunni, how perfect and so very well said...gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, what a powerful poem, dearest Saunni! I too believe that in every layer of gray, there is an importance and a hope that falls with the rain and promises a harbinger of sunshine, just as every mountain stands with strength and wisdom that such gifts one may receive can be as sturdy as they seem. (sigh) BRAVO!!! Marvelous wisdom in this piece! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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