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PoemCrazy
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since 2000-11-30
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0 posted 2001-06-05 06:22 PM


she hums the tune of a love song,
thinking i'll not notice?
or wanting me to?

mystery made of flesh,
my temptation,
your presense is my spark.

how did you know what i can't resist?

float to me like music,
your every sound a note
that only i can hear.

your breath becomes my wind,
your eyes my moon and stars,
your body my world to explore.

fold me in your universe
and let me go.
where i need to be

lost in you.

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-06-05 06:28 PM


I like this, real nice

Titia

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latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

2 posted 2001-06-05 07:04 PM


Interesting poem of resistancing temptation and wanting. Good read.
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