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Nathaniel Shain
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since 2001-06-03
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0 posted 2001-06-05 05:37 PM


Her Lips and Tongue

Her lips and tongue
could certainly
wake the dead.

In moaning whispers
I tell her where
I’d like to have them placed,
but she won’t listen to my words.  

She wants to explore,
more and more and more...

Yikes!  


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1 posted 2001-06-05 05:43 PM


and here I thought 'twould be a most serious write, and you Yikes it at the end....

charming!

Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-06-05 06:08 PM


Love it  
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-06-05 06:17 PM


More like woohoo?  Heating up Passions right now

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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4 posted 2001-06-05 07:07 PM


Oh My, I read this and I agree with more like a woo hoo....sure wasn't expecting this!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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