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jellybeans
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0 posted 2001-06-05 04:27 PM


In the sun rising to meet the morn
and the steaming coffee cup
I still pour to visualize your sip and
close of eyes
exhale,
you are near.

In the heat of the day
as I smile back and
reach fingers that can’t help  
disappear into the mirage
but heaven is not
untouchable,
forever, you are near.

In your voice, soft vibrations
of comfort linger,
your aftershave dallyies
in passenger seat memories,
wherever I go,
you are near.

In the pushing forward of my hips
to import the memory of
your touch
to the close of night’s eyes  
holding my pillow tight,
you are near.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 06-05-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-05 04:31 PM


(sigh) Such soft and tender expressions of beautiful love! (sigh) Oh jellybeans, I always have these thoughts too when I look at the smallest things, when I look at the moon, smell a rose, lick candy, lie in a daffodil field, thoughts of my dream girl come swimming in my head, flooding me with passion. (sigh) Such beautiful sentiments! Your love is so very lucky to share your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-06-05 04:33 PM


noah, thank you...such a tender reply, you have a wonderful heart...and sigh...my "love" is in heaven...but he is still near in my heart...
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3 posted 2001-06-05 04:52 PM


This is so tender... I think it touches everyone who knows what it's like to hold someone in their hearts long after arms are empty. Well done, dear lady!
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4 posted 2001-06-05 05:09 PM


JB...your love's touch is stll tender...helen
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5 posted 2001-06-05 05:27 PM


Tender indeed.... nice visuals of everyday things and happenings which remind us of more..
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6 posted 2001-06-05 05:33 PM


I knew when I saw the title....
we seem to have the same ache today...
beautiful bittersweet write JB
take care of you
jm

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

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7 posted 2001-06-06 09:15 AM


suthern...you know what your 'well done's mean to me   thank you lady

helen...thank you

cspat..glad you liked   thank you

JM...oh if only we could turn back time.....sighs and hugs.....thank you lady

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8 posted 2001-06-06 11:24 AM


this broke my heart (((((hugs)))))))

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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9 posted 2001-06-06 11:30 AM


Jellybeans,
Thats about as near as you can get without being there. Well done. Sy

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