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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-06-05 03:51 PM



Gaze, let me feel thy eyes wonder over this land laid fallow by tradgedy.
Many a moment I have pondered the tribulations, that have turned men to dust.
A cause? a quest of words to bring fire to the hearts of innocent men who had no desire or wish to mingle flesh with the mechanicals of a clinical demise.

Think for a moment, close your eyes
Clear your mind of the man made termoil
feel your surroundings, listen to the earth beneath
your soft feet.

Whispers from a bye-gone era, the past - yes, calling the present, hollow voices softly educating the future- yet learn we not!

Hold thy spark in cupped hands,
note the small, soft and spritely atoms of energy
Do not dismiss the spark for being a just so, for its capibility is unimaginable my friend.....


Rich

-mmm...a thinking day today.


opps - I dont relish the cat head icon! -lol

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1 posted 2001-06-05 04:17 PM


BRAVO!!! Such a marvelous message of pure wisdom! Yes, we must use our knowledge from the past, scrutinize it like a snow globe, build ourselves as the loving people we are born to be here in the present, and share this love in the confluence to the future. Your wisdom indeed shines in your poetry, I enjoyed this read very much! (giggles) I too don't relish that cat head icon very much, but my favorite living form is a butterfly, so I use the blue morpho to be able to fly into the imaginations of others! (smiles) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-06-05 07:42 PM


awesome - powerful write!
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