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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-06-05 01:41 PM


Have you ever watched a woman talk?
A real woman? Not a plastic beauty queen
but one that knows from what she’s seen;
one that also can walk the walk...
have you ever watched a woman talk?

It starts down deep with a mix of brain
A thought process that begins a refrain
deep from her diaphram, up through her throat
when she speaks to you of the words she wrote
and huskily tells you, she could say it again.

Without any deception, she’s sensuous for you
even when she recites the grocery list
because if you stroke the violin fine
as you think you can always do
then that is when you will begin to discover the kiss.

You thought it was just skin and soft lips
when she turns to look at you, standing there
ready to bare herself.
And her shift shifts to her hips.
But your gaze doesn’t linger there.

She’s talking, and walking, coming toward you
and your eyes are mesmerized by how the words come through
those lips, voice, husky, sensuous, warm and true
all of those words she saved for you.
Out of those lips, so soft, ‘tho not new.

Oh your god, here they come upon your skin
warm and luscious, you’re melting within,
touching you here, there, can a man melt?
The lips of a woman like you’ve never felt.
Never before have you experienced such passion.

Have you ever watched a woman talk?
Have you ever watched her walk the walk?
Have you ever known such passion true?
When she gives all of this........
to you?

© KRJ 22 Jul 99


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-05 01:47 PM


(smiles) OH MY GOSH, my heart melted and my mind swimmed as I read this poem making me wish I had my girl right now and I could feel for her this way and melt in her kiss. (sigh) Though I haven't yet fallen in love, I always hear the way she talks and see the way she moves and her lips dance in my dreams, and every time I indeed do melt. I always dream of having her reach for me and touch me and give everything to me as I give everything to her! Wow, I went off again on a tangent, I lost myself in the passionate beauty of this poem! (smiles) I love it!!! This is a masterpiece to hold onto forever, sweet Sunshine! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-05 03:29 PM


Mother may I?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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3 posted 2001-06-05 04:52 PM


Oh my... Whoa, Nellie!     I loved this, Karilea.  You get an A+

Michael

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