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Beneath Rainbow Falls
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Beneath Rainbow Falls |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Beneath Rainbow Falls The stream of enlightenment runs pure and cool In swift flowing currents to mind’s crystal pool I’ve bathed in the dreams of contentment and peace Where springs never dry and where dreams never cease My heart has been cleansed from all worry and strife My mind has been freed from the burdens of life The moments are timeless, the waters are tamed The mysteries of love are now calling my name My skin is refreshed with the wet of the wild My mind is renewed like the thoughts of a child Delight falls upon me from places above My life is complete now because we have loved Elizabeth Santos June 3, 2001 |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is so very beautiful....thank you for sharing.... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
The stream of enlightenment runs pure and cool In swift flowing currents to mind’s crystal pool I’ve bathed in the dreams of contentment and peace Where springs never dry and where dreams never cease **** oh Liz how beautiful are these lines....thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I just doesn't get any better than that. Lovely Sy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is an amazing poem, the feeling it gave me as I read it is indescribable Kathleen Blake |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! I love rainbows, and this poem took my breath away as you weaved together such an extraordinary vision through a cognitive sense of self-appreciation! Let the rainbow scarf you and heal you of all your pain and sorrows! (sigh) Beautiful poem Elizabeth! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Elizabeth, this is so beautifully serene! Wonderful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Liz, now this is where I want to be. . . simply outstanding. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this one i absolutely LOVE  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ *Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* I felt the flow of love cascading ...  Lovely ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Such a wonderful piece, so beutiful and tender. Thank you Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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