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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-05 10:04 AM



you ask who I love
and I respond I love you
you ask what I love
and I say I love your soul
you ask when I love
and I say eternally
you ask where I love
and I say wheree’r you are
you ask why I love
and I say you are God’s gift
you ask how I love
and I say with all my heart
totally and completely




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth




[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-05-2001).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-05 10:10 AM


Well then, you've certainly answered her question....

but you know? Another one will always pop up....

Enjoyed!

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2 posted 2001-06-05 12:00 PM


This is sweet....sometimes we need to be told...
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3 posted 2001-06-05 12:15 PM


This is lovely!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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4 posted 2001-06-05 01:21 PM


yes,this is beautiful....so very sweet....and yes, sometimes we do need the words  
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5 posted 2001-06-05 01:29 PM


lovely sweet piece.....enjoyed it very much.

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-06-05 01:36 PM


Decaflame ~ I tried, yet another question is inevitable, isn't it?  

Paula ~ Yes, we all need to be told  

Colleen ~ A lovely response froma lovely lady.

SEA ~ Thank you for your "sweet". *sigh*

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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7 posted 2001-06-05 01:37 PM


Charisma ~ Almost missed you   I am glad you enjoyed.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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8 posted 2001-06-05 07:14 PM


I love the way that "mirrored", as there is no better way of communication in the world!  I truly enjoyed this poem and its structure too.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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9 posted 2001-06-05 07:21 PM


i do like your poem it is excellent. i can see you like to write poetic poems about how u feel. thats good cause when you meet that right one u will be noticed as a sweet and kind person. stay real and treat the ladies right with honesty and true love, and you will be successful in their hearts.
Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-06-05 07:30 PM


Interloper, this is such a sweety,  

Titia

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11 posted 2001-06-05 07:32 PM


Such a tribute of loving expression you pen'd. It could only warms one soul. A beautiful token of a poem.
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12 posted 2001-06-05 07:34 PM


Mysteria ~ If you like my work I know I have succeeded  

Julian ~ Thank you for your kind comment.

Titia ~ You are the sweety  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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13 posted 2001-06-05 07:36 PM


i wish i knew how to get that cool clapping smiley into my posts cuz you so deserve some
major clapping with this one,i love it  

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2001-06-06 07:07 AM


Interloper,

Each question well-answered results in a good or better question...

This one is fantastically done...

regards,
sudhir

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15 posted 2001-06-06 09:25 AM


Watersign6 ~ I appreciate your 1derful applause and faithful reading of my work.  I am honored indeed.

Sudhir ~ Thank you for the fantastic comment my friend.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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