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Kitty Land
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Kitty Land |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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My son brought home a new kitten, of course he knew I could not resist so it looks like we have a new little bundle of joy! Kitty Land Pitter-patter of fury little feet kittens run about with little care except to pounce upon the other! Finding that little piece of thread is to embark on a journey that will take them through an array of acrobatics that boggles the mind! What seems to have been hours of thumps and bumps they then settle down to align their attire and with very much care do they pretty them selves Of course when you think they just do not seem to need you! they then can-not seem to leave you alone giving kitty kisses passionate purrs and a nose full of fur! Then with great ease they fall off to sleep to get ready for their next great adventure in a world we find mundane and fruitless By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Then with great ease they fall off to sleep to get ready for their next great adventure in a world we find mundane and fruitless Here, your heart is more exposed than the enire remaining portion of the poem...to use/realize the antics of the kitten as a reflection of enjoying life no matter what comes is a grand spring board from which you might explore your heart and find its healing. I believe you have only begun to touch upon the strength that you will find in pursuing these thoughts toward its balm. In the 3rd stanza, you want 'have' instead of 'of' in the 1st line's "it seems to 'of' been hours... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Aren't they a joy? Enjoyable read. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
kittens are wonderful but they lose some of that charm when they become older, they quickly let you know who is boss, even they really ham up the cute factor. REally enjoyed the read. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Unh-uh Brian...CATS are wonderful creatures, from first to last....and yes, I'm biased as all get out....even though I love dogs....cats and horses have my heart first.... Enjoyed this, Cerenity.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Aren't they fun to watch? I sit and watch mine a lot although he is far from a kitten now. Still too cute though! Nice write!  All writing comes |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A delightful read...enjoyed this. PM |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for your kind reply's, this past couple of days with the new kitten has been well "LOUD" to say the least! him and my other cat are none stop all NIGHT!!! but they really are wonderful kritter's, again thank you. Love, Cerenity |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is great Cerenity. . . and of course, cats are wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
love kittens and love your poem  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
cats in a cradle and a ... ... a beautiful poem, this one, cerenity... regards, sudhir |
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