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walker
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0 posted 2001-06-05 07:41 AM


The night was made for you and me.
Nothing can distract us,
we were meant to rule the night.
And in this world of sudden changes,
one thing remains the same forever,
that is my love for you.
In the night we paint our love,
among canvas we stencil our touch.
While playing out this love,
because the night was made for us.


[This message has been edited by walker (edited 06-05-2001).]

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-06-05 11:07 AM


this is truly tender and sweet

I hope you don't mind me thinking so

it's luscious like a cashmere sweater on one's sweetheart

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-05-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-06-05 11:25 AM


Very nice read.
Martini
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3 posted 2001-06-05 12:54 PM


I enjoyed this one, it was honest and caring and sweet

well done

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4 posted 2001-06-05 01:13 PM


loved reading this tender piece.

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-06-05 01:17 PM


Nicely done
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6 posted 2001-06-05 01:22 PM


(sigh) So magically tender and beautiful! I love every word in this; it made me wish that I was living the night with my dream girl under the starlight! (smiles) Yes, when you and your love are embraced together, the night is enchanting, for true love is heavenly. (smiles) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-06-05 01:23 PM


lovely lines....
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8 posted 2001-06-05 01:26 PM


enjoyed this one immensely  
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