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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-06-05 12:53 PM

At first it came into the leaves,
down the branches, amidst the trees,
Reaching out to follow the ground,
so you would know I was around.
With softness it touched loose falling tresses,
bathing your cheek with long caresses

You closed your eyes so you could hear,
what was whispered in your ear.
“Oh gentle soul, do not fear,
for you know I’ll always be near.
Open your arms and feel what’s me,
dreaming your dreams to eternity.”

Slowly a smile spread over your face,
as lips were touched only a trace.
You only knew you felt alive,
there was no question you would survive.
You turned your back and walked away,
knowing the breeze would always stay.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-06-05 01:39 AM

"dreaming your dreams to eternity"

Lovely thoughts...enjoyed this very much.

PM

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-05 02:21 AM

extremely soft and gentle, Logan, it's as if the soft summer breeze was tenderly filled with the Spirit's love

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-06-05 04:03 AM

Do you know how you touch this womans heart? As softly as that breeze.....

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-06-05 11:56 PM

Oh, yes. This turned out exquisitely, Sweet One. From the tops of the trees and down. I did enjoy this!

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-06-06 12:06 PM

Now this I like! Well done.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-06-06 01:22 AM

Thank you gentle people for kind words and being here...gentle smile

Poeminister, thank you greatly for your thoughts and words..apppreciate them very much..

Thank you VAS, is not the breeze but the breath?.appreciate your comments and thoughts here...gentle smile

Ahhh Paula, gentle smile. You do so humble me with your kind words. thank you so very much.

Temptress, oh gentle one, then they were words and thoughts worth writing... gentle smile

Michael thank you for the read and your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed it..Best wishes

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-06-06 07:59 AM

very gentle and soothing i enjoyed it

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-06-09 05:16 PM

Logan~
Oh, my !
Gentle shivers of delight found in soft breezes blown.

You write from a well-spring of emotions
that drenches the reader in refreshing perspective.

Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-06-09 05:31 PM

(sigh) Sucha beautiful poem of truly found love bound to last eternally! (smiles) I know the feeling of this breeze all too well, and I'm still waiting for first loves breeze to swim around my soul forever! (smiles) You are the one who will always have this soft summer breeze kiss her heart, for your heart floods with such purity of love! (smiles) Sooooooo beautifully lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

10 posted 2001-06-09 05:46 PM

I almost closed my eyes to feel the sensations myself, but I didn't want to stop reading!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

11 posted 2001-06-09 05:58 PM

oh gentle ones, your words are of such softness and kindness...gentle smile

Watersign, I am glad you enjoyed, thank you for coming and reading...gentle smile

Marge, gentle smile, thank you, your kind words always fall on welcomed ears..

Noah, such a wonderful and sweet thing to say, my appreciation knows no boundaries...gentle smile

Azblond, your presence here makes all brighter..thank you for coming by and being so kind...gentle smile

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

12 posted 2001-06-09 06:19 PM

Oh what we hear when we close our eyes and open our hearts. You've captured that with beauty and grace. My compliments!

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2001-06-09 06:24 PM

This was positively lovely, Logan. Very soft and romantic write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

14 posted 2001-06-09 06:31 PM

Ahh Tovi, your comments are always so kind and gentle, thank you for them...gentle smile

Lone Wolf, I appreciate your comments, and thank you for the read and thoughts...gentle smile

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

15 posted 2001-06-09 06:43 PM

this is gentle imagery to the reader....well done.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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