Lost Melody ---an Acrostic poem---

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Open Poetry #14

Lost Melody ---an Acrostic poem---

SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

0 posted 2001-06-04 11:21 PM

Languishing in the pain
  Of my very own creation
   Searching silence praying
    To hear a single song adored

Melody of yesterday
  Everydays lost tomorrows
   Listening strain ears desperatly
    One refrain one single sweet note a
     Doorway to the past nailed shut now
      Your melody is you, lost to me forever

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

[This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 06-04-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-06-05 07:18 AM

SilentSongs~
The haunting refrain of another's sweet melody
lingers long after the song is gone.

Quite emotive writing.
Well done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-06-05 08:51 AM

...listening strain ears desperately...

you play delicately with words and their meanings give voice to each wave of thought as one takes time to simply relish your work...

a beautiful write, this....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-05 09:37 AM

sing to me my love
bring your melody softly
forever sharing

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-06-05 01:23 PM

Memories remain
melodies made of time's flow
singing tommorow

PM

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-05-2001).]

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-06-05 01:32 PM

Melody of yesterday
Everydays lost tomorrows
--------------------------
How many melodies we lose along the way.....??
I try hard not to think about that.....

A truly touching and so much said in its few lines.

Thank you for the read.
*********************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-06-05 01:34 PM

Lost melody ? I think not is is indeed quite melodious. Nicely done

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