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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2001-06-04 10:08 PM



Blue gate open,
birth-stone broken,and  
night was passing me on the broom.
And i was last in line, the white pearly line.
And ankle deep,
the blue shrine began to speak
pick posies over wine
and hold your sticks in your arms.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2001 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-04 10:13 PM


Oh this is just stunning....so enjoyed this...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-06-04 10:27 PM


This is lovely, expressive verse, good to see you posting!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-06-05 12:02 PM


gorgeous... absoulutely gorgeous

"She's been looking like a queen in a sailor's dream, and she don't always say what she really means"

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4 posted 2001-06-05 12:03 PM


sound like a rainforest to me!   hugs miss "a"!
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5 posted 2001-06-06 06:27 AM


originality at its finest..thank you for the images conjured...
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6 posted 2001-06-06 08:02 PM


and let the rain fall down!!  

I loved this one. . .

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redheart angrybraids
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7 posted 2001-06-25 04:25 AM


this is for rain on his birthday, thank you all so much for your tender words
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8 posted 2001-06-25 06:24 AM


beautiful!  

Always love reading you!

Maree



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9 posted 2001-06-25 12:18 PM


RedHeartAngryBraids~
Sweet girlie of the mystical verse ...
share my Happy Birthday wishes to Rain !
Glad this got kicked back up ... as I missed it.
Good to see you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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10 posted 2001-06-25 03:00 PM


Your poetry tickles me so, it is so unique, of course that adorable picture adds a great deal to how I hear the words read.
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11 posted 2001-06-25 03:05 PM


Absolutely beautiful images, and Happy Birthday to Rain too!  I really enjoyed your gift.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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