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Open Poetry #14
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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
0 posted 2001-06-04 09:45 PM


Unclear crystal strewn about
one unlike the other

Shifting over brown turf
building layers in times path

A sheet of brightness, frigid
defying the sun

Resting peaceful until spring
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brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2001-06-05 04:43 PM

A sheet of brightness, frigid
defying the sun


that magic moment before birth. Enjoyed this alot. great images.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett
Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-06-05 05:16 PM

Good descriptive peice.  Well done.

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3 posted 2001-06-05 05:26 PM

nice
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