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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-06-04 08:02 PM




Melodies
soft as ancient
drums accompanied
by virgin's song
in long forgotten
language
is your voice
echoing
upon my heart

~*~

As ripened mangos
eaten in ecstacy
beneath
cool palms
is the sweetness
of your kiss

~*~

clear, aqua
pools
adorned with
hibiscus
honeysuckle,
& spices
is the refreshment
of your love
under stars

~*~

As rich java
sliding in
alternate heat
& ice down
delicate throat
is your warm
brown skin
against my
own...

~*~

One
eternal sweep
of moon in
heaven's
arrangement
with song &
melodious sound
upon forever
we are founded...
~*~
upon
delicate wings
of always,
I love you...



~Tier{R.T.}
6/99


© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-06-04 08:05 PM


Tier, I'm just running out of words to tell you about your writing. . . every time I read it, there's just something about it that speaks to me. . . like I've read it before. . .

excellent. . .I can see the picture that you paint. . .

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Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-06-04 08:21 PM


Sven, thank you... it's so nice to be "heard"...

*hugs*

~Tier

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3 posted 2001-06-04 08:45 PM


Tier, each could well stand on their own....but the blend is....java.....with cream....
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4 posted 2001-07-06 12:32 PM


Tiers---simply luscious...each image more rapturous than the preceding--sheer ecstacy!!!
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-07-06 02:18 AM


Tiersdin~
This is elegantly phrased !
The presentation is breathtaking~
VERY nicely done ! !
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2001-07-06 08:29 AM


Bravo!! Such pictures you paint and such words you weave... enjoyed this a great deal!!!
Kethry
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7 posted 2001-07-06 09:22 AM


Tiers,
delicious images you paint.
Keth

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