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BrightStar
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0 posted 2001-06-04 03:44 PM



My every thought is of you
I try to think of what to do
But thoughts of you seep into me
I don’t do what I ought to be

In my dreams you frolic and play
My mind steals, seals each word you say
While fate it seems has sealed my plight
I dream of you, fancies take flight

I cannot wait to feel your touch
To taste your lips I want so much
To hold you so close to my breast
To tell you that you are the best

Fantasy is true in my life
It helps to ward off all this strife.

© Copyright 2001 BrightStar - All Rights Reserved
Love
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1 posted 2001-06-04 04:34 PM


A fantasy may rise to see us through. But to know real life is to reach to touch. I hope that happens for you.
Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-06-04 04:41 PM


Sounds like Cupid has had a fling...enjoyed!
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-06-04 06:28 PM


Perfect rhyme!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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4 posted 2001-06-04 08:07 PM


here's hoping that your wait will end soon. . .

excellent poem. . . flowing and soft. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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5 posted 2001-06-06 08:47 AM


lovely poem  
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