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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-06-04 02:03 PM

*Gallery Reading Room*

do my words reveal
what I can't conceal?
does my heart feel
this love so real?

or, do I conceal
what I really feel
when words appeal
and my heart reveals?

has the pain I feel
in my heart been healed?
my words a seal
to pain so real?

or is it a spiel
to get you to feel
when I appeal
with words unreal?

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-06-04 02:05 PM

Riddles seem to like me today....I shall ponder....

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-04 02:06 PM

Sven, your work just amazes me. You are beyond talented, My Friend. Enjoyed!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-06-04 02:16 PM

The last part..I loved...I always try to make people feel. Great ponderings, Beautiful Heart.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-06-04 02:41 PM

Done deal!

I enjoyed the twisty turns of this Sven!

theLadypoet
Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 97
Or USA

5 posted 2001-06-04 02:46 PM

Sven, hello

Good question. Certainly my primary goal is make people feel something, so it is my poetic responsibility to make sure I am not padding the work.

Could read this poem with several avenues of
meaning.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-04 08:13 PM

Lady in White, there are riddles everywhere these days. . . thank you for pondering. . .

Saunni, thank you so much. . .

. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

Temptress, glad that you liked it. . . I believe that we all try to make people feel. . .

serenity, thank you for reading my friend. . .

Ladypoet, thank you. . . I'm glad that you could see the different layers of this. . . it's what I was trying to get across. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-06-05 01:38 AM

Either way...you'll get no complaints from me. I often wonder 'is it real, or is it Memorex' when I read you...then I just think to myself it is always your heart talking.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-06-05 08:52 PM

big grin for you my friend

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2001-06-06 10:11 PM

I agree with JLR no complaints here from me as well....always a treat to read your words Sven...

Lauren~

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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-06-07 01:10 PM

rj, you've got the right idea. . . thank you my friend. . .

WS6, thank you!! And here's one for you!!

Lauren, always a treat to read you as well my friend. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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