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theLadypoet
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 97
Or USA

0 posted 2001-06-04 10:52 AM



OLD WOMEN


Sometimes old woman get a package from hell,      
that way deep down, most heinous of hells.
Their spirits weary, no fight left in them, they bow
to whatever power has called out their name.
Sometimes it’s as simple as a man’s fist from
out of nowhere, leaving her wondering why it is
her jaw, her bones, her husband who she loves
more than the breath busy in her old lungs.
The more she wanders the more she wonders
at the puzzling dilemma. And one day she goes
beyond the borders of sanity without even
noticing the Hazardous Territory sign.
Old women take a lot of punishment.
Stronger than a bar of steel is the back of an
old woman. It is her heart that leaks and bleeds.
Insanity is doing the same thing over and over,
the pundits say. She just wanted to get it right.
No fury flames in an old woman’s soul…
just sad disappointment they vent with a sigh.
Old women wander wearily, wearing no tomorrows,
only aching yesterdays that they keep in their pocket,along with a fast food napkin and a bent penny.
Yesterdays nest in a coven of denial.
Mama was too drunk to say there would be days
like this.
She’s an old woman, too … bitter
as gaul and evil as a stepped on snake.
Old women accept that they weren’t wanted
then…and they aren’t wanted now. They are
just in the way, silent observers of humanity.
Traveling through their own hours that are not
ticked off on the clock of human intercourse.
Purses that cost $100.00 are cheap to some,
who hold such things dear. You can snag one
at a Goodwill drop-box on about any night.
Hairdos and makeup…old woman have faces
written on by the quill of life, masterpieces.
Old women take all that life has to dish out,
eat with a rusty spoon, and endure.
Old women endure.

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

© Copyright 2001 Sherry Asbury - All Rights Reserved
Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
1 posted 2001-06-04 11:34 AM


There has certainly been an increase of violence toward our elderly, and I fast aproach that description. An important point made herein.

"I am not now that which I have been."

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

2 posted 2001-06-04 02:52 PM


oh........this gave me chills and wet eyes....am without words...so let me just say this touches deeply...it is insightful and powerful.....
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