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theLadypoet
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0 posted 2001-06-04 10:42 AM



Angels scooted through
my windows this morning.
Not invited nor expected…
arrived without warning.
They hugged me, tugged me,
and swirled me in dance.
Then swooped away
heavenward without another glance.
Do I feel abandoned by
their disappearance into the air?
No, for if you look carefully,
an angel is always there.

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

© Copyright 2001 Sherry Asbury - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-04 11:36 AM


Angels are a wonderful wisp, are they not? Enjoyed this one!
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-06-04 12:08 PM


"Angels scooted.."

what a lovely way to put it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


ethome
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3 posted 2001-06-04 12:55 PM


Delightful, pretty and down to earth up to heaven poem!
brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2001-06-04 01:10 PM


I guess I should leave my windows open and put out a well come mat for angels and then they might come visit.
enjoyed the read

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

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5 posted 2001-06-05 07:23 PM


I love this.  I enjoyed reading it so much.  Just something I needed to read    thanks for sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele,

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-06-05 07:26 PM


an angel is always there"

Truley.  Beautifully said.  Enjoyed this read.

Poeminister

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7 posted 2001-06-05 10:45 PM


bump  
Balladeer
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8 posted 2001-06-05 11:50 PM


very nice, Lady   Blessed are those lucky enough to be awakened by angels..
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