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short_stuff03469
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since 2001-06-03
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0 posted 2001-06-03 06:34 PM


I know you want to go
Yet I don’t see why
You would miss so much
You would never get to drive
Never get to live in your own house
Never graduate from collage
Never travel to places you’ve never been
Never become famous
Never get to see what the future holds
You would be greatly missed
Things would be so different
I would be without my best friend
A piece of me would be missing
School would never be the same
You have effected many people
With you gone
These people would be lost
I know you want to go
Yet I don’t see why


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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-03 06:37 PM


A good question asked" A very good poem of query into a human situation!
Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-03 08:52 PM


good poem i enjoyed it alot  
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-06-03 08:57 PM


Really liked this good written poem.

Titia

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