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short_stuff03469
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since 2001-06-03
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0 posted 2001-06-03 06:12 PM


I smile.
I frown.
Yet I don’t see you around.
I laugh.
I cry.
I wait for you all night.
When things go right,
I search for you.
When things go wrong,
I yearn for you.
But,  you do not come.
You are not there.
In my brightest hours,
I wait to share with you.
In my darkest hours,
I wait to mourn with you.
Still, you do not come.
You are not there.
When my days are dark and gray,
You cannot stay.
When my days are happy and bright,
You are out of sight.
No matter how long I wait for you,
You do not come.
You are not there.



© Copyright 2001 Laura - All Rights Reserved
walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
1 posted 2001-06-03 06:14 PM


I like this one allot, well done!
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-06-03 06:15 PM


Sad but the point arrives on the page well...thanks!
Just A Man
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since 2001-06-02
Posts 15
Pain
3 posted 2001-06-03 06:20 PM


Sadly too many of us
know love only as empty
lies on a backdrop of betrayel
how the users find their prey
I cannot begin to answer

"In daring to dream, offering life,I am sentenced to life as a Deadman walking. Such ends all Love given."

[This message has been edited by Just A Man (edited 06-04-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
4 posted 2001-06-03 06:28 PM


Welcome to Passions, the place where friends share their laughs and sorrow.

Nice write

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-06-03 07:03 PM


Well done...and welcome to Passions!
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

6 posted 2001-06-03 07:10 PM


Delightful,
Thank you for the read, and welcome
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
7 posted 2001-06-03 08:51 PM


enjoyed very much,welcome  
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2001-06-03 09:41 PM


Welcome to Passions! I hope you find your way around with ease, if not, the moderators at here to answer any and all questions...

Have fun, and write on!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
9 posted 2001-06-04 12:41 PM


So sad but I have been there, and actually I still am! A great write though.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Interloper
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since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-06-05 09:05 AM


Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
11 posted 2001-06-06 08:36 AM


Hi ShortStuff,

Can understand this one very well, wonderful first post and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, we are here all of the time so write on my friend.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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