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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-06-03 06:05 PM

What happens to love,
when one gives too much?
Does it get spoil like a little child?
Or does it wither away like a flower with too much water?
Does it drown in deep oceans when the storms arrive?
What happens to love,
when you're not around?
Does it miss you on cold nights?
Or does it lies in a deathbed waiting for you to respond?

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-03 06:17 PM

I think it does those things and beyond depending on the circumstances.....good poem!!

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-06-03 06:59 PM

Yes, I believe "love" is an action word quite aside from a feeling or desire.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Just A Man
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since 2001-06-02

Posts 15
Pain

3 posted 2001-06-03 07:03 PM

If I had the answer to that I would hang my shingle, and no doubt be the the most in demand advisor inthe world. Alas I do not,nor know I any who do.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-06-03 07:18 PM

Good question...good write!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-06-03 10:15 PM

Hi Walker,

This is one of those poems I will read over and over again, the questions are perfect ones to dwell upon, wonderful writing here, enjoyed much.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2001-06-03 11:45 PM

I can so relate here...this is a good write. Enjoyed it!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-06-05 02:22 PM

what a wonderful read Walker

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-06-08 08:29 PM

sometimes it evaporates and dies from lack of nourishment...

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Tovi
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

9 posted 2001-06-08 08:43 PM

Sometimes I think it can do all of those things. Very very good write! I've really enjoyed your poetry.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-06-08 09:57 PM

why does something have to happen to love..why can't it just be there always....

sighing
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2001-06-08 10:00 PM

Oh if only I knew......

Lovely, lovely poem (big hug)

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-06-09 11:36 AM

I would say. . . well. . . I don't know. . . that's the mystery. . .

well done my friend. . .

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