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Lover of the Mists
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Lover of the Mists |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
A sound barely heard in the misty air, made me pause to wait right there. Then strain my ears to see if its she, my phantom lover who waits for me. The warm mist wraps in a warm embrace, feeling your soft breath against my face. I open my arms to welcome you there, the mist dances in as though to share. A soft voice whispers in my ear, a smile damp with shedding tear. Only to appear when sensing my need, my lover hidden in the mist from me. Knowing she's there is enough for me, my hidden lover who waits to be. Hidden in the mists, she still remains cold, My longing arms ache to hold. I feel her touch upon my cheek, soft as down, it makes my heart weep. I know I’m alone as the mist swirls round, but the feeling remains of her presence found. My lover hidden in the mists from me. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A soft voice whispers in my ear, a smile damp with shedding tear. Only to appear when sensing my need, my lover hidden in the mist from me. Knowing she's there is enough for me, my hidden lover who waits to be. Hidden in the mists, she still remains cold, My longing arms ache to hold. I feel her touch upon my cheek, soft as down, it makes my heart weep. I know I’m alone as the mist swirls round, but the feeling remains of her presence found' This is a superb write, Logan...excellent imagery, and the rhymes are fantastic! Great job...I love it! sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I want to find that mist  Kathleen Blake |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a cool, calm, collective read...thank you! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Evocative the mist, warm is the fog as day breaks. She shall appear in time as you gently call to her. Wonderful write. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Logan,this is just marvelous an very enjoyable to read,great imagery too  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Better and better, Sweet One. Sad but hopeful. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I find this poem so appealing! enjoyed reading! ~Tier |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Thank you snowpants for your kind words. I appreciate your time in looking and posting...gentle smile LOL, Irish Rose, it is just on the other side of Brigadoon. Thanks for reading...gentle smile Sunshine, thank you for your soft words, may the old ones always watch over you...gentle smile Julian, thank you for your read and thoughts, they are appreciated Thank you Watersign, it is always nice to see you here with your thoughtful words...gentle smile Ahh, Temptress, gentle one, thank you for all your kindnesses and especially your friendship...gentle smile Tier, gentle smile, thank you for your read and your words. I am glad it appealed to you...gentle smile |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Logan...thru the mysts she calls your name...beautiful |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
I'd like to BE that "mist". Wonderful writing. Ah yes, physically being without the one you care for is difficult but it's the love you hold in your heart that will help to keep you content and happy. Thank you for this. Hugs, Tammy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan...this is lovely! |
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