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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-06-03 01:04 PM



You're speciality
is bringing sunshine to me
you're always
brightening up my days
with your sweet ways

Always...

Knee deep in love with you
no matter what you might do
if you leave me,
if you wanna be with me-
either way,
I'll still feel the same

Always...

~Tier
6/97


© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
1 posted 2001-06-03 01:12 PM


nice sentiment of unconditional love and appreciation for what they provide for you...not enough of that in the world...ROCK ON!!!  

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
2 posted 2001-06-03 01:14 PM


Thank you, Rodney!

*smiles*

~Tier

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-06-03 01:16 PM


Ah, now this one just smiles at me!
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-06-03 01:50 PM


Lovely loyal and devoted poem!
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2001-06-03 02:51 PM


Beautiful write, Tier, as usual...I really like it...your poems always have the sweetest lines of love...great work!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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6 posted 2001-06-03 07:23 PM


Knee deep in love...how cool is that!
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas
7 posted 2001-06-03 07:28 PM


Aww, Tier, how so very sweet and heartfelt..very nice read..gentle smile
Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
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Hurricane,WV
8 posted 2001-06-03 08:33 PM


really wonderful amazing well written poem  
Cerenity
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Escondido-California
9 posted 2001-06-03 10:04 PM


Hi Tier,

I too love the line "Knee deep in love "
wonderful, this is a spectacular write, I will have to keep my eye's out for more of your work, enjoyed very much.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
10 posted 2001-06-03 11:30 PM


Aww, this is beautiful! Enjoyed this  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
11 posted 2001-06-04 06:46 PM


Thanks everyone for reading and commenting!  *Big Hugs & Kisses*

~Tier

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