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vandana
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0 posted 2001-06-03 11:05 AM



How I suppose to know,
You will leave ,
How suppose I to know
you don't love me,
You are not the same person,
I used to know,
I should have known
from the start,
You are not the only one for me,
No,
you are not the one for me,
How suppose to know
you had lied me,
and play a game with me,
I was such a fool
to fall in love with you,
How suppose to know ,
You will break my heart
In first place,
And I will never your face
again
How suppose I to know
you will leave me,
How suppose I to know
you were playing with my heart,
I was a fool for you
to fall In love with you?
You say
you love another
and you don't love me,
How suppose to know
you will leave
and break my heart In two

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-03-2001).]

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-06-03 11:10 AM


Sad and compelling.  We never know.  We can only take the chance.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-06-03 11:44 AM


Very sorrowful Vandana ... you've captured these emotions well ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2001-06-03 12:37 PM


So sad, Vandana, I can identify! I hope things work out for you soon!  *hugs*

~Tier

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-06-03 01:48 PM


Such sadness and sorrow here, Vandana.  This one brought a tear to my eye.  Hang in there, my friend, you will get through it.  I have walked in your shoes and the road will become clear for you in time.  May God bless you.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Rodney Belcher
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5 posted 2001-06-03 01:55 PM


you described my soon-to-be ex-wife to a tee!...you know her?...sorry for your pain, but I can sympathize also...not much comfort, but thanks to loves elastic ability, we can try, try again to find someone special...just never give up!

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

snowpants
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6 posted 2001-06-03 03:22 PM


Sad, sad poem, vandana, but you've expressed your emotions very well...very good write!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Mike
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7 posted 2001-06-04 09:36 PM


Nicely written Vandana.  enjoyed your poem.
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