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Deafheaven
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since 2001-06-02
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Sudbury, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-03 08:40 AM


Look at me

I want to look into your eyes
I want to see your soul
I want to hold you oh so tight
And never let you go

And when I look into your eyes
Look into mine
And know I mean the words I say
And hold your love sublime

Let me lose myself in those fields of green
Let me warm my heart with your lovely smile
Let me see your lips before our kiss
And enjoy your countenance just for a while

Don't be shy
Don't fear my gaze
Don't think I look for flaws
Just let me be amazed

By my green-eyed lovers' eyes

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-03 11:10 AM


Aha! This certainly caught my [green] eyes!
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-03 11:12 AM


The eyes are the windows to the soul. Well expressed.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


walker
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3 posted 2001-06-03 11:26 AM


Very beautiful and romantic!
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