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Logan
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0 posted 2001-06-02 11:04 PM


“Old one, what is your name?”
Call me by what you wish, came cryptically,
because I am only what you feel and have need for me.
I am what I am, but only what I can be for you.
But now I am for you in whatever role you wish me to be.

Call me Teacher, if you wish to learn.
Call me Comforter if you wish to be held.
Call me Rock if you wish a support on which to cling.
Call me Forever because I will always be in your mind.
What is a name? It is the thoughts that matter.
It is only important that I am there for you.

My name is Strength.
Strength when you need it.
When your needs are one of purpose
and you have to carry on, regardless of the burden.
When you feel the world is against you, and you stand alone.
When you question your purpose in life and others let you down.

My name is Compassion.
Compassion to the needs of others.
Compassion to the ones weaker than myself.
Compassion to the hurts of the world.

My name is Love.
An unselfish love for the people who need such love.
A giving without a receiving.
An ache for the torment of younger ones than I.
A refuge for the wounded in spirit.

My name is Mercy.
Mercy to forgive transgressions.
Mercy for the envious who try to hurt with words.

My name is Honor.
A code by which only I can live.
To live life as I perceive it by my rules alone.
Come share with me by whatever name I be.


© Copyright 2001 Logan - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-06-02 11:08 PM


Logan, I really enjoyed this!  
Logan
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2 posted 2001-06-02 11:19 PM


Poet..coming from you, I am honored and humbled. Thank you for reading and responding...gentle smile
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-06-02 11:30 PM


Call me Teacher, if you wish to learn.
Call me Comforter if you wish to be held.
Call me Rock if you wish a support on which to cling.
Call me Forever because I will always be in your mind.
What is a name? It is the thoughts that matter.
It is only important that I am there for you.

My name is Strength.
Strength when you need it.
When your needs are one of purpose
and you have to carry on, regardless of the burden.
When you feel the world is against you, and you stand alone.
When you question your purpose in life and others let you down.
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what a very cool poem ....
I love all the comparisons and devotions
wonderful poem of promise and hope
well done ...and welcome to Poetry Land
jm

Paula Finn
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4 posted 2001-06-03 01:16 AM


Logan...this is just incredible.....you are quite an amazing poet...
Logan
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5 posted 2001-06-03 02:13 AM


Janet Marie, thank you so much for all your words and the welcome..most appreciated...gentle smile

Aww, Paula, thank you, you humble this old man...gentle smile

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6 posted 2001-06-03 02:45 AM


Well after my post, and our email, I have a name for "what is in a name" and it is Maggie, as she is all of those things. Logan, I am printing this and showing it to her tomorrow if that is okay, as it is not often you find something to tell an older person all that they are, and have become.  Thank you for a wonderful poem.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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7 posted 2001-06-03 03:22 AM


I would call you all of those things and My Friend would also suit you nicely. Thought provoking and heartfelt writing, Sweet One.   enjoyed.

Logan
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8 posted 2001-06-03 04:26 AM


Mysteria, of course you may use it, and give me great honor by so doing. Give Maggie a wink for me and my best wishes please...gentle smile

Temptress, you humble me.and I thank you for your friendship...gentle smile

Jamie
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9 posted 2001-06-03 04:16 PM


very very impressive writing.
Mabel A. Dilley
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10 posted 2001-06-03 04:20 PM


Perfect. I AM the I AM: at once in all things of life's expression.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Watersign6
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11 posted 2001-06-03 04:34 PM


Logan,you are outdoing yourself with all these amazing poems,well done my friend  
ethome
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12 posted 2001-06-03 04:37 PM


Logan this is a great poem!  It's amazing how many wonderful qualities can be found behind a name if the person has some honesty and integrity!
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13 posted 2001-06-06 06:55 AM


the title pulled me in and i am impressed by what i read...

this reminds me of the poem If by Rudyard Kipling...i remembered being awed by those positive qualities as i read and my reaction was identical with this musing...

write on!

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