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Deafheaven
Junior Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 23
Sudbury, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-02 05:15 PM

I think I'm fairly versed in words and take joy in the turning of a phrase

Looking for hidden meaning and hidden thought
Ordinary words used in extraordinary ways brings new depth to shallow perception
Very special thoughts expressed in very special ways enhance life's play
Even the most banal of situation becomes empowered with the writer's pen

Yet despite the power of the scribe, some words I thirst to transform from pen to mouth
Often the written seeks common bond but some words mean more when personalized with tone, inflection, and direction
Under the guise of this contemplation is an expression of emotion concerning

Jennifer Anne Marie, whose loveliness of soul has surely captured me
Every thought that I've expressed through note has meant so very much but
Not as much as the day I hold you in my arms, look into your eyes, and pass these words through breath

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-02 05:17 PM

Welcome to Passions....with your wit, and adept pen, you are sure to find many who shall read yours, and we hope that you in turn will come to find many poets here whose work you enjoy as well!

Now, sit back, relax, and enjoy Passions!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-02-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-06-02 05:36 PM

Lovely, welcome to Passions.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Deafheaven
Junior Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 23
Sudbury, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-02 05:52 PM

Thank you to those who have welcomed me to this lovely abode

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2001-06-02 05:58 PM

Jennifer Anne Marie, whose loveliness of soul has surely captured me
Every thought that I've expressed through note has meant so very much but
Not as much as the day I hold you in my arms, look into your eyes, and pass these words through breath

well written poem here really enjoyed the read. beautiful images Welcome to Passions.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-06-02 06:00 PM

Nice words of admiration Deafheaven...James

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2001-06-02 06:06 PM

Welcome!

Glad you found your way to passions...and a very nice first entry you have..

K

It is to do with tree-ferns:
mamuka, pongo, wheki.
Shelter under here is so easily understood.
From 'Hope', by Dinah Hawkins

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-06-02 08:10 PM

Even the most banal of situation becomes empowered with the writer's pen
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Every thought that I've expressed through note has meant so very much but
Not as much as the day I hold you in my arms, look into your eyes, and pass these words through breath
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This is wonderful...Welcome to Poetry Land...
I look forward to reading more of your indepth turn of phrase

very well done new poet, cool name too
take care
jm

Im searchin for my warrior
walkin the tracks of time
this struggle to seek forgiveness
like chains and shackles...these ghosts of mine

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