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Double Acrostic
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Double Acrostic |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Double Acrostic Unwavering devotioN Never to undO Completed rhythM Obtainable areA Never out of hearT Deepest type of trusT Immeasurable timE Timeless dooR I shall shadoW Open ended trutH No need to pleA Always in thoughT Lifetime storY Lighting the way to gO Open heart for yoU Vastness to beholD Everlasting toO |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
amazing. . . absolutely amazing. . . I should know. . . I've tried to do one of these. . . but it never came out looking this good. . . great job helen. . . truly one of your best. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very creative, Helen, very original. Kathleen Blake |
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Deafheaven Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 23Sudbury, Ontario, Canada |
I really loved this. I am a fan of the acrostic style and coincidently, just posted an acrostic here myself today. Never tried a double acrostic though. Very, very nice. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
To say that I am impressed...would be a shameful understatement! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have told of what it takes to keep love working. Exceptional!!!!!!!!!! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is really cool! Really! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent. Superbly done. PM |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, amazingly well woven with threads finitely melded. |
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deepblue Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 17 |
oh, wow! love the subject too |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
WOW 1slick_lady ,,, this is AWESOME ,,, i've done a few acrostics myself,,, but never a Double Acrostic,,, thats tough ,,,, nice work... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
First time I read this i didn't catch on to what you were trying to do. Now I do. Cool! Difficult form, done well. I especially like "Timeless door" & "Vastness to behold" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Very, very nicely done. Nice flow - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You are aptly named-- this is very slick There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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