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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-02 04:35 PM



Sometimes Angels Unaware

~*Marge Tindal*~

Sometimes angels flaunt their deeds
drawing attention to their needs
While other angels softly stay
on scattered cloud far away
And meditate in quiet way
to make another's day

I know just such an angel as this
lighting stars on soft-blown kiss

giving others credit for
all the deeds she did implore
Roses flower with a smiley face
Carnations showering hinted trace
Spring bouquet spreads hint of cheer
While sweet Bird Of Paradise soars near


I'd like to hug an angel, for all her thoughtfulness
A friend of ours in need, caught her soft-blown kiss
Bouquets sent in ALL our names you see
'From Your Friends At Passions In Poetry'


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-02 04:40 PM


Beautifully written and presented. This is a love-filled poem!! I'm sure the Angel you describe will love it.  
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2 posted 2001-06-02 04:47 PM


Margie girl, this is utterly beautiful, as yours always are love. What makes your work so special is the fact that you always sprinkle your works with Margie love, and that's why they shine.

Utterly wonderful poem, written with your grace and your charm, and the extra sparkle is pure you. A delight my sister of heart,

            love and warm stuff
              as always
                take care
                 Mushy
                  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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3 posted 2001-06-02 04:52 PM


Lovely thoughts Marge...James
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4 posted 2001-06-02 04:55 PM


May I add some babe's breath, carnations and a few roses among your bouquet, Marge?  Ah, thank you....
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5 posted 2001-06-02 04:56 PM


Hey Marge,
Did they throw you out? I thought you were an angel? Well in any case you write like one
*L* Sy

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6 posted 2001-06-02 05:42 PM


What a beautiful token for your angel. I enjoyed your poem very much.

Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly.

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7 posted 2001-06-02 09:10 PM


Yes, I read about the flowers, and am glad you wrote a poem thanking the angel who included us all. Marge thank you for being an angel also.

Whoever and wherever you are God Bless You!!

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8 posted 2001-06-02 10:58 PM


yer so beautiful..do ya know that???
One of MANY angels in this poetic home...
very very cool Margie...
spreading your own angel dust
a lovely way to thank someone for doing something "just because"

Im searchin for my warrior
walkin the tracks of time
this struggle to seek forgiveness
like chains and shackles...these ghosts of mine

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9 posted 2001-06-02 11:08 PM


This is beyond beautiful! Beyond it! I so enjoyed it.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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10 posted 2001-06-02 11:13 PM




  OH MARGE
WHAT MAGIC YOU CAPTURED IN THIS ONE


another cherished keeper

lovya dearly.........warrior

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11 posted 2001-06-02 11:56 PM


Such sweet affections...lovely write.

Poeminister

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-Plato

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12 posted 2001-06-03 12:25 PM


very pretty Marge, are we both thinking of angels lately, but mine are not as nice as yours. J
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13 posted 2001-06-03 12:48 PM


Thank You Anonymous Flower Angel


I was sure I knew who it was but it turned out not to be who I thought it was! Flowers given without a card of acknowledgement are most certainly from the heart and soul of an earth angel!  

So, I will hunt no further, but only say to this Angel, and I hope you are reading this...you have NO idea what your thoughtfulness did, no possible idea! A heart that was so forlorn and sad, suddenly saw and felt love, "sunshine", and new hope in a lot of darkness. Where there are friends there is love, and there is always hope. Thank you sweet earth angel, may God bless you always, and thank you for "putting my name on your card too!"

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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14 posted 2001-06-03 01:50 AM


Beautiful tribute, Marge...I love this...

sp  

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

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15 posted 2001-06-03 03:16 PM


Dear Mr. or Mz. Angel:

The hospital has been told to forward any flowers received to Koko's (Cherie's) house, as she was discharged yesterday and is home now trying to recover.  Cherie knows of this kind jesture now as well, and wishes to thank you, Sharon


~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-03-2001).]

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16 posted 2001-06-04 04:01 AM


Simply wonderful Marge!  

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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17 posted 2001-06-04 04:14 AM


I'm not sure who you're blowing kisses to with this one, but I trust your judgement Marge! So....smooochies!!!!  
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18 posted 2001-06-04 04:46 AM


What a beautiful tribute to this angel I'm sure she will love this! Wonderful words of appreciation Marge!
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19 posted 2001-06-04 01:49 PM




oh......so softly twinkingly beautiful......
I don't know who is that angel but s/he surely deserve it if s/he has inspired you to write such beautiful poem......

===============

Angels on earth.....
creatures of mystery
sent from heaven above
to lessen our misery

==============


Thank you

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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20 posted 2001-06-04 07:33 PM


SweetFriends of Passion~

Please know that the 'angel' mentioned here
is aware of your sweet words.
Sometimes ... just sometimes, someone comes along and gives quietly of themselves to someone they don't even know ....
I think that's what earth angels are all about.


Mysteria and Karilea ...
Please don't polish my halo ! I swear, it was not me !


Thanks to each of you for enjoying my little thank you ...
and in case an 'angel' peeks in ...  


KoKo ...
You continue to just get better, honey.
Take the utmost care of yourself and do exactly what the doctors (and friends) tell you to do.
Love you ! !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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