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. . . From the core of me
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. . . From the core of me |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The words boil up from the well of me From the still of me The will of me How do I speak all these words to thee From the core of me Give more of me As I approach and reach out to thee From the love in me The soul of me Thee take offered hand and set me free I give all to thee My love to thee Thy love in return is all I see How thee give to me Life back to me I know thy love is the whole of me ‘Tis the breath of me Nay, not me, WE Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause! Oh, this is simply superb. What a wonderful flow to these sweet words Interloper, I loved the style and form ... excellent indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
There is nothing more precious than an open heart. Kathleen Blake |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper--Sounds like love..liked the last line particularly. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Kit ~ *blush* *sigh* Colleen ~ Aye, and one to share it Martie ~ Thank you. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sigh* your beautiful words make me float on air.....*bigger sigh* this is so lovely |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now THAT was poetry! *applause* ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
You've expressed an such an endearment of love from your inner core. Simplicity. This was a beautiful read. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Interloper..a wonderful study of giving, then the sharing,,very well done indeed |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You've spoken love here poigniantly and sweetly, very nice. Poeminister |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ *sigh* *blush* The Tall Texan scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust.. Mysteria ~ *blush* Shux, ma'am, thanx LP ~ Yup, just a simple man Thanx.Logan ~ My first time to hear from you, I think. Thank you for the read. Poeminister ~ I understand sweet *blush* but the other word is too big for my brain Thank you poet friend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Lovely *sigh* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ *sigh* Thanx. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow...this just trickled down the page, gathering momentum, and probably...a little more... well done Sir! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ A trickle here and a trickle there, pretty soon you have a torrent Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
WOW! Excellent!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Watersign6 ~ *blush* *sigh* Thanx Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You not only get a WOW but also and A+ on this one. Just excellent!! Michael Proust- |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
This is outstanding, wonderful flow, wonderful writing. |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
a beautiful read wow it just flowed |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
As from where the most beautiful part of love doth flow...Read Interlopers poem and ye shall know. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What an amazing poem!.......... I just can't say much more! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Auguste ~ Golly whoppers! Heartfelt thanx. Tovi ~ I think your first time to drop by. thanks for the read and the kind comment. zzz ~ Your first time too. I appreciate your time and fine comment. azblond ~ *blush* *grin* You are too kind Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ethome ~ Thank you my friend. Even a blind hog finds an acorn now and again Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
excellent penned my dear friend. love it. Charisma |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
so romantic! you seem to have touched many hearts, Interloper |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Charisma ~ Thank you VAS ~ What a wonderful comment and, for the first time in my life, you started a second page of comments. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Excellent work, very stylish with a great flow, I enjoyed Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
OOOH! wowwy! cool  really enjoyed this hugs, g the boy said, my name's johnny |
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